Tuesday, February 28, 2006

reflecting in
warm shimmering sunset -
childhood memories

this works much better


Blogger Gerald England said...

I like both haiku and picture but the block capitals are too large and detract. They are also difficult to read, and probably not just because I've a degree of red-green colour blindness.

nonetheless a nice thought

6:56 AM  
Blogger Aurora said...


7:16 AM  
Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

when I have time I'm going to try to fix it. I looked at it on another computer today and saw what you see -- my computer is set on large print and it looks nice. Didn't think about what it looks like elsewhere - sorry

10:19 AM  
Blogger Alan Summers said...

almost lost
in the shimmer of water
several ducklings

Thanks for the beautiful image, and maybe you can resend it with different typeface, but still enjoyed it.

Water images are a fave along with snow, must be an H2O thing! (-;

11:04 AM  
Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

thanks alan, I'm going to change it tonight --

12:37 PM  
Blogger Sherrie said...

love the haiku...
I'll be back for more.


12:51 PM  
Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

Sherrie - thanks - if you come back it won't be the same one you saw :)

6:06 PM  
Blogger Gerald England said...

much clearer -- excellent -- well done

12:14 AM  
Blogger Alan Summers said...

Great Andrew!

Love it even more now. (-;

3:30 AM  
Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

thank you both -

10:55 AM  

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