reflecting in
warm shimmering sunset -
childhood memories
this works much better
posted by J. Andrew Lockhart at 6:38 AM
Tuesday, February 28, 2006
reflecting in
warm shimmering sunset -
childhood memories
this works much better
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9 Comments:
I like both haiku and picture but the block capitals are too large and detract. They are also difficult to read, and probably not just because I've a degree of red-green colour blindness.
nonetheless a nice thought
when I have time I'm going to try to fix it. I looked at it on another computer today and saw what you see -- my computer is set on large print and it looks nice. Didn't think about what it looks like elsewhere - sorry
Andrew
almost lost
in the shimmer of water
several ducklings
Thanks for the beautiful image, and maybe you can resend it with different typeface, but still enjoyed it.
Water images are a fave along with snow, must be an H2O thing! (-;
thanks alan, I'm going to change it tonight --
Andrew
love the haiku...
I'll be back for more.
:)
Sherrie - thanks - if you come back it won't be the same one you saw :)
much clearer -- excellent -- well done
Great Andrew!
Love it even more now. (-;
thank you both -
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