Monday, February 27, 2006


shopping village cold rain beats down down

4 Comments:

Blogger laryalee said...

Hi Gerald,
what a great juxtaposition here --
your haiku gives a whole new meaning to the striking photo!
:-)
Lary

12:00 PM  
Blogger Aurora said...

This is beautiful.

1:38 PM  
Blogger Denis said...

Gerald,

It isn't often that one wants to repeat a word in haiku, especially in a one-liner, but it works here perfectly. The incessant rain is well evoked. Well done.

bw,
Denis

2:42 PM  
Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

good one! the photo is so bright and fits well with the dark haiku -
Andrew

6:23 PM  

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