Tuesday, February 28, 2006

clear cold blue -
all the things I've wanted
but couldn't have


Blogger Aurora said...

I love the mood this evokes!

7:17 AM  
Blogger Alan Summers said...

I've seen this before and it's still evocative, and sublime.

8:34 AM  
Blogger Yansidara said...

i love this poem.

5:09 PM  
Blogger Timothy said...

Hey! You're getting sneaky now and managing tankaesque feeling in a haiku. (I think I spotted another recent one that managed it as well).


1:11 AM  

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