we walk hand in hand
my jacket on her shoulders
through the day's last light
lobster pots and sweet whitebait
the keepers of cormorants
Little Onion
my jacket on her shoulders
through the day's last light
lobster pots and sweet whitebait
the keepers of cormorants
Little Onion
4 Comments:
very beautiful tanka,thank you,angelee
very beautiful tanka,thank you,angelee
I'll say it twice too, beautiful beautiful tanka.
That's an amazing last two lines, it really makes the tanka zing.
excellent...loved this
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