Tuesday, April 18, 2006

we walk hand in hand
my jacket on her shoulders
through the day's last light
lobster pots and sweet whitebait
the keepers of cormorants

Little Onion

4 Comments:

Blogger angelee said...

very beautiful tanka,thank you,angelee

12:13 AM  
Blogger angelee said...

very beautiful tanka,thank you,angelee

12:15 AM  
Blogger Alan Summers said...

I'll say it twice too, beautiful beautiful tanka.

That's an amazing last two lines, it really makes the tanka zing.

1:37 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

excellent...loved this

1:00 PM  

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