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posted by angelee at 6:44 PM
Angelee,I like this version better than the other. The one egg focuses on its beauty in the dull day. Very nice, indeed!
Hi Angelee!I enjoyed the alliteration of the first line, and it sounded very good out aloud. I recommend anyone reading Angelee's to read it out loud!Outside of Easter and Eostre, and other egg festivities, I would think this haiku would have a hint of mystery/sadness.Thank you.
wicked pedia: Eostre and the Brothers Grimm
I like both..Sangeet
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