Monday, April 17, 2006

dull dusty day
in my workworn hands
a painted egg

angelee

5 Comments:

Blogger Aurora said...

Nicely done!

6:54 PM  
Blogger Denis said...

Angelee,

I like this version better than the other. The one egg focuses on its beauty in the dull day. Very nice, indeed!

8:38 PM  
Blogger Alan Summers said...

Hi Angelee!

I enjoyed the alliteration of the first line, and it sounded very good out aloud. I recommend anyone reading Angelee's to read it out loud!

Outside of Easter and Eostre, and other egg festivities, I would think this haiku would have a hint of mystery/sadness.

Thank you.

2:58 AM  
Blogger Alan Summers said...

wicked pedia: Eostre and the Brothers Grimm

3:30 AM  
Blogger sangeet said...

I like both..

Sangeet

1:07 PM  

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