Monday, February 20, 2006

spring breeze
against a cloud filled sky
the roar of jets

angelee

6 Comments:

Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

you can see AND hear it -- good one

7:46 PM  
Blogger laryalee said...

I like this!
:-)
Lary

8:46 PM  
Blogger Denis said...

Angelee,

The jets lend a sense of threat to this bucolic image. Thought-provoking haiku!

bw,
Denis

9:32 PM  
Blogger Gerald England said...

good to see you here

12:36 AM  
Blogger Little Onion said...

Thank you angelee for your poem and out of it and the night came:

all night long
thoughts of my dead brother
contrails

Little Onion

1:20 AM  
Blogger Norman Darlington said...

Hello Angelee, it's wonderful to see you here. My reaction was similar to Denis's above. The haiku is more complex than immediately apparent.

Best wishes
Norman

4:45 PM  

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