Sunday, February 26, 2006

sign of spring—
a little league billboard
freshly painted

4 Comments:

Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

good one -- my son is a baseball addict, so here we go -- night after night of setting outside, listening to mothers screaming-----

12:47 PM  
Blogger Eric said...

excellent dustin. surely a sign of spring . . .

7:26 PM  
Blogger Little Onion said...

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1:05 PM  
Blogger Little Onion said...

hi dustin

i see it

and yes as eric says 'surely a sign of spring' and so perhaps we don't need the first line to tell us so - the last two showing us

i'm perhaps splitting hairs :)

but this does have a feel of tell more than show - i think it might be the use of 'sign' - that pushes it that way - i see that some kind of spring kigo might be useful for those not familliar with little league culture - but something less directed eg (just for illustration)

melt waters
a little league billboard
freshly painted

first crocus
a little league billboard
freshly painted

or somesuch...

Thanks for sharing the billboard with us. I can smell the paint.

March and minus 15 degrees celsius spring shrinks back

Little Onion

1:06 PM  

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