Wednesday, February 22, 2006

under the willows
fo ot pr in ts
collecting rain

10 Comments:

Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

I really like your idea for line 2 -
Andrew

5:08 PM  
Blogger Aurora said...

I love the visual this brings.

6:50 PM  
Blogger Eric said...

dustin--
most excellent.

3:14 AM  
Blogger Pat Paulk said...

Dustin are you southern? I like the way you stretched out line 2, too!

5:55 AM  
Blogger Janet said...

ditto!

8:20 AM  
Blogger extraspecialbitter said...

dustin - my highest compliment: I wish I had written this.

10:25 AM  
Blogger texas haijin said...

thanks a lot for that, paul. you're one of my favorites on here. i think that sometimes about other people's haiku. i think i just stumbled into routine, and haiku hasn't been coming to me so well.

10:30 AM  
Blogger Jason Sanford Brown said...

Enviable!

5:38 PM  
Blogger Denis said...

Dustin,

You have memorably captured this moment, bogging about amongst the willows. We have them on the property, along the trout stream. Always wet underfoot.

Kudos.

bw,
Denis

8:28 PM  
Blogger Norman Darlington said...

I thoroughly enjoyed this, Dustin, for all the reasons others have outlined above. Well done :)

1:32 AM  

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