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posted by david giacalone at 2:48 PM
This is so well expressed, David...I know the orchardists worry when these cold snaps occur.Good work!:-)Lary
Nicely layered, rich without being overstated. Excellent work David!
David,Your word choice, 'miscarry,' lifts this haiku on high. Well done!bw,Denis
Thank you, everyone. I need to be more pithy more often.
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