Saturday, February 18, 2006

coldest day this winter --
the early buds
miscarry

4 Comments:

Blogger laryalee said...

This is so well expressed, David...
I know the orchardists worry when these cold snaps occur.
Good work!
:-)
Lary

9:24 PM  
Blogger Jason Sanford Brown said...

Nicely layered, rich without being overstated. Excellent work David!

6:32 AM  
Blogger Denis said...

David,

Your word choice, 'miscarry,' lifts this haiku on high. Well done!

bw,
Denis

4:29 PM  
Blogger david giacalone said...

Thank you, everyone. I need to be more pithy more often.

8:47 PM  

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