Friday, February 17, 2006

Not entirely springy, but not unspringy, my newbie attempt at a tanka:

this morning's
sky of blue;
jet contrail
marking a journey
I cannot follow

tc

2 Comments:

Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

not bad at all!
Andrew

11:47 AM  
Blogger laryalee said...

Works for me!

:-)
Lary

2:32 PM  

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