morning mist
in the prayer garden
my prayer
beneath petals
of a tulip tree
in the prayer garden
my prayer
beneath petals
of a tulip tree
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3 Comments:
Dustin,
I like the meditative feel of this one. Have you considered whether 'beneath' for 'hidden under' might add ambiguity? Just 2 cents' worth...
bw,
Denis
very quiet - nice
Dustin, this is lovely!
I've been trying to contact you
and can't find an email...
could you email me?
laryalee@yahoo.com
Thanks!
:-)
Lary
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