Saturday, February 18, 2006

morning mist
in the prayer garden
my prayer
beneath petals
of a tulip tree

5 Comments:

Blogger Denis said...

Dustin,

I like the meditative feel of this one. Have you considered whether 'beneath' for 'hidden under' might add ambiguity? Just 2 cents' worth...

bw,
Denis

10:02 AM  
Blogger texas haijin said...

i like that.

10:38 AM  
Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

very quiet - nice

11:50 AM  
Blogger laryalee said...

Dustin, this is lovely!
I've been trying to contact you
and can't find an email...
could you email me?

laryalee@yahoo.com

Thanks!
:-)
Lary

2:26 PM  
Blogger Timothy said...

I liked how delicate it felt.

1:22 AM  

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