Wednesday, March 29, 2006

almost easter
the car salesman tells me
to lighten up

Little Onion


Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

:) I like this

3:27 PM  
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3:36 PM  
Blogger Area 17 said...

I wonder if he's now seen 'The Apprentice' with Sir Alan Sugar on BBC2? (-;

traffic jam
a driver fingers the breeze
through the sunroof

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1:51 AM  
Blogger Little Onion said...

I did see it last night Alan. The car salesman that dealt with me and features in the haiku is not at a 'car supermarket' like the one that was featured in 'The Apprentice' last night - he spent ages telling us about his life, where he was born, how he liked surfing - when all I wanted to know was the best price he could do me on a new Toyota...

And he actually told me to 'lighten up' - well I did - I left him and calmly completed my purchase with another salesman...

'fingers the breeze'

I like that

but I'd have liked to have given the first guy 'the finger' - maybe him losing commision was a better punishment - this said maybe I should I 'lighten up' and on refelection his stories now seem quite entertaining... hmmm

2:20 AM  
Blogger Area 17 said...

Looks like the makings of a good and humourous haibun lil onun!

2:25 AM  
Blogger sangeet said...

Nice ku!


11:36 AM  
Blogger laryalee said...

Thoroughly enjoyed this!

10:06 AM  

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