Monday, March 27, 2006

the river is running
old sediment red
since the drought's broken
a prospect of lives
full to the brim

3 Comments:

Blogger Aurora said...

I think I won't write a pivot-less tanka again. This is so very well done.

4:04 PM  
Blogger Denis said...

Nice wordplay in L5 also!

6:01 PM  
Blogger laryalee said...

This is a memorable image, Matt!

:-)
Lary

7:33 PM  

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