almost easter
the car salesman tells me
to lighten up
Little Onion
the car salesman tells me
to lighten up
Little Onion
posted by Little Onion at 2:46 PM
Wednesday, March 29, 2006
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7 Comments:
:) I like this
ditto
I wonder if he's now seen 'The Apprentice' with Sir Alan Sugar on BBC2? (-;
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I did see it last night Alan. The car salesman that dealt with me and features in the haiku is not at a 'car supermarket' like the one that was featured in 'The Apprentice' last night - he spent ages telling us about his life, where he was born, how he liked surfing - when all I wanted to know was the best price he could do me on a new Toyota...
And he actually told me to 'lighten up' - well I did - I left him and calmly completed my purchase with another salesman...
'fingers the breeze'
I like that
but I'd have liked to have given the first guy 'the finger' - maybe him losing commision was a better punishment - this said maybe I should I 'lighten up' and on refelection his stories now seem quite entertaining... hmmm
Looks like the makings of a good and humourous haibun lil onun!
Nice ku!
Sangeet
Thoroughly enjoyed this!
:-)
Lary
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