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posted by Anonymous at 9:09 PM
the weight of rain in my hair - something i don't have too much of a problem with these days Aurora :my headwondering if i should combor polish ityour haiku brings to mind a haiku written by a 15 year old in workshop with me a couple of years ago:limp hairhangs past my cheeksbeating rain zosia bredowLO
i like it. both the haiku and having april rain in my hair :)
Aurora, I very much like the tactile imagery here. Very evocative.
aurora, i'm in full agreement with my collegues on this one
really nice!
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the weight of rain in my hair - something i don't have too much of a problem with these days Aurora :
my head
wondering if i should comb
or polish it
your haiku brings to mind a haiku written by a 15 year old in workshop with me a couple of years ago:
limp hair
hangs past my cheeks
beating rain
zosia bredow
LO
i like it. both the haiku and having april rain in my hair :)
Aurora, I very much like the tactile imagery here. Very evocative.
aurora, i'm in full agreement with my collegues on this one
really nice!
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