Thursday, March 02, 2006

4 Comments:

Blogger Aurora said...

Love that shot.

6:36 PM  
Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

perfect -- is that your hand?

7:04 PM  
Blogger Little Onion said...

Hi Eric,

I like the feel of the haiku. I was wondering what it might look like with a slight change in order - to perhaps save the second two lines from maybe been to 'carry on' from the first line - i see the two dashes you have to make the cut after snow but i still read:

'march snow deepening my cabin fever'

i was wondering about:

march snow
my cabin fever
deepens

just a thought

thanks for sharing this picture and poem this haiga - it got me thinking.

Fight the fever!

Little Onion

3:21 AM  
Blogger Alan Summers said...

A perfect meld of image and haiku I'd say! I've really enjoyed revisiting your photograph and haiku each time I come to ukku spring haiku.

I quite like little onion's suggestion, maybe an excuse to get another photograph with the differently worded haiku? I'm happy to be double-treated! (-;

8:56 AM  

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