Tuesday, February 21, 2006

5 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

Eric,

Very nice indeed!

bw,
Denis

5:04 PM  
Blogger laryalee said...

This brings a sigh...
good one, Eric!
:-)
Lary

7:38 PM  
Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

I love this one!

8:16 PM  
Blogger Little Onion said...

I like the 'lightness' of the haiku Eric.

I'd be interested to see it alongside a not as strongly connected (in terms of mood/subject)image.

It does work on this image but maybe its the kind of image that we might expect with such a stanza.

Maybe a less direct more renku like linking between image and stanza would take us on further.

It does feel very romantic and sentimental - and both the image and haiku feel like this independently of each other. So that feeling is reinforced when put together and that can't be a bad thing especially on a cold wet morning here in the UK!

Great image good haiku!

Looking fotward to more through the project.

Little Onion

5:31 AM  
Blogger Yansidara said...

beautiful.
makes me feel good.

9:16 AM  

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