black-bottomed clouds
careening seaward—
cacophony of gulls
posted by Anonymous at 5:28 PM
Monday, February 20, 2006
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7 Comments:
beautiful - I love photos of clouds. There's so many things you can use them for (or is it that they use us?).
Andrew,
Thanks. The photo is by NOAA. I am a cloud fanatic myself.
bw,
Denis
Lovely -- I'm just up this morning and going to the site your picture leaped out at me.
behind closed curtains
the rain is beating down
I'll shower later
Gerald,
Thank you for the kind words and for the fine senryu.
bw,
Denis
Norman,
So glad this pleased and that you found so much in it. Thank you!
bw,
Denis
Hi Denis,
I love this haiku...so rich on the tongue...and rich with imagery, even without the photo!
:-)
Lary
black-bottomed clouds
Terrific opening line! Reminds me of a song as well.
all my best,
Alan
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