Sunday, March 05, 2006

sunnyafternoon2
sunny afternoon -
birds declare spring to
the playing children

5 Comments:

Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

All of my children and two other children were drawing on our drive in today. I couldn't resist it --
Andrew

11:08 PM  
Blogger mattm said...

cool idea andrew, matt

3:34 AM  
Blogger Little Onion said...

I like the chalking of the stanza on the floor.

Birds singing, twitering, nesting and on - all real indicators of spring and so kigo - seasonal references - here you swop it around - instead of giving us the kigo and us finding spring you give us 'birds declare spring' and we find the singing!

Enjoy the birds and even more so enjoy the childrens' playing.

Little Onion

4:05 AM  
Blogger Aurora said...

I love this one.

7:22 AM  
Blogger Eric said...

excellent haiku. cleverly done.

10:18 AM  

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