the spring moon
was at my window
in the night
but it has gone
now too
was at my window
in the night
but it has gone
now too
posted by Alison at 12:30 AM
Monday, February 13, 2006
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5 Comments:
What I enjoyed about this one is that it has a hint of sweetness at the start that fades into poignancy at the end. So lovely.
Alison,
The sense of loss permeates this one. Sad and lovely. Kudos!
bw,
Denis
I agree with Denis.
Andrew
A lovely image that brings a sigh...a memorable tanka, Alison.
:-)
Lary
Thanks all!
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