Monday, February 13, 2006

the spring moon
was at my window
in the night
but it has gone
now too

6 Comments:

Blogger Christine Klocek-Lim said...

What I enjoyed about this one is that it has a hint of sweetness at the start that fades into poignancy at the end. So lovely.

2:38 PM  
Blogger Norman Darlington said...

I like this a lot, Alison. I agree with Christine's assessment - and we are left with a hanging question: what too?

2:48 PM  
Blogger Denis said...

Alison,

The sense of loss permeates this one. Sad and lovely. Kudos!

bw,
Denis

4:03 PM  
Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

I agree with Denis.
Andrew

6:13 PM  
Blogger laryalee said...

A lovely image that brings a sigh...a memorable tanka, Alison.
:-)
Lary

11:29 PM  
Blogger Alison Williams said...

Thanks all!

10:52 AM  

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